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The VOX editors really wanted to emphasize diversity with this story, so I wanted to show it right from the start. I also wanted to use fun, bright colors to emphasize the quirky youthfulness of the story. I wasn't crazy about the solid orange background, but I wasn't able to come up with another idea that I knew I could execute in a professional manner. Also, I grabbed the arrows from our Nosh prototype (two birds, one stone haaa).opening spread
I wanted to continue presenting the diversity of those featured in the article. I absolutely loved this photo of Phylshawn Johnson. It's really fun and energizing (as are the other lead photos here), which I thought would attract readers.secondary spread
With the secondary spread I was trying to show how I would work to squeeze 30 vignettes into the 10 pages that were originally slated for the story. Because there was so much text and a photo for each story, I didn't want to use too many "decorative" design elements. We all knew the pages were going to be tight. I chose to use bold drop caps, numbers and pull-quotes to help break up the seas of gray.
In the end, I still feel as though my designs were far too text heavy. I wish I would have found a better solution to help split up the stories more definitively, as did Theresa. She developed a really great broken grid technique that convey the story's VOX-y edginess, which, of course, is why her design was chosen :)
I think you achieved getting across the quirky youthfulness of the story with the colors you chose. I loved the photo of Phylshawn Johnson too, and I think it works great for the lead. Your spreads are well organized and clean. I like your treatment to each name/hed/deck. The drop caps look nice and using pull quotes was a good idea, I didn't even think of that for some reason.
ReplyDeleteI really like the drop caps as well. I think my favorite one is the photo with the text inside. I also had a hard time separating the text into different segments. While I like the photos, I don't believe they lent themselves to this situation because both the cutouts and the very light backgrounds don't offer enough striking contrast with the layout.
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